Mar 27, 2013

Introductory statement for REVISED Essay #2


I’ve chosen to reserve my right of “revision” to Essay #2 – Critiques.  The major difference between my final essay #2 and the revised version is that I have put my original thesis statement, which I emulated the format and style of the thesis shown in the essay guidelines, into completely own words of mine.  Basically, the “new” and “old” claim of my essay share the same meaning; they simply differ in how it is presented.  Other than the thesis part, all the remaining parts of the essay are kept the same for the revised version. 

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