Jan 31, 2013

Essay #2 - Pre Writing


1. Comparison Grid


Relevant text from Critique 1
Relevant text from Critique 2
Relevant text from Critique 3
What are the dangerous of social networking?
1. Con artists and child predators use social engineering to misrepresent themselves on social networks, tricking their victims into sharing passwords and personal information.

2. Fraudsters pose as friends of users; claiming to have been robbed on vacation and requesting emergency wire transfer of cash.

3. Cyber thieves gain entry to online bank accounts in the guise of friendly quizzes on social networks to collect private user information.
1. Students in middle school, high school and college are being suspended and expelled for their online indiscretions.

2. Whatever you post, it never goes away.

3. People’s personality, personal lives are shown public, which might affect their chance of being employed.


N/A
How do normal users not involve in criminal activity?
1. Do not reveal personal / private information, like bank account, address etc., to suspicious websites.
N/A
N/A
Are we giving out too much personal information?
1. Some people are unaware of the consequences of giving out too much personal information online.
1. Some people are giving out too much personal information, not only through posts they post online, but also through their email addresses.
N/A
What are the boundaries of censorship?
1. Censorship helps minimizing the opportunities for internet criminals, however, if one decided to disclose his or her personal information, he or she might still fall into the criminal’s trap.
N/A
N/A
What is the impact of social media?
1. Raise people’s awareness towards the importance of not disclosing too much personal information online
N/A
N/A


2. Blocking Plan

Aim of writing the essay: To express my opinion among the three columns concerning the topic of social networking websites.






Jan 17, 2013

Essay #1 - Final Draft


Jasmine Ho
Mr. Hayes
English 1A17
17th January 2013
Word Count: 1010

Cheese

            “Why are there so many kinds of cheese? They simply look the same to me,” said Peony, she then randomly took a piece of Parmesan to have a look from the cheese session in Whole Foods Market. “Well, of course there are differences, like …” “Actually how does milk turn into these cheese curbs?” She ignored me and continued talking.  Obviously, she is bored doing grocery shopping with mum, and simply trying to find something to talk about.  A random question from my sister reminds me that, though cheese is an often-used ingredient in cooking, the production of cheese is like a mystery to lots of people.  Generally speaking, the three principle ingredients of cheese are milk, rennet enzymes that curdle the milk, and microbes that acidify and flavor the milk.  Each strongly influences the quality and character of the final cheese. Pasteurization, adding of rennet, heating, molding, and aging are the basic processes that make a piece of cheese. 
“And how do we decide which kind of cheese to use in a particular dish?” Peony’s question pulled me out of my mind.  Indeed, this is a good question.  The flavor of the dish will definitely be affected with the misuse of cheese.  So what are the factors to be considered?  The differences in taste and texture of different kind of cheese determine how are they used.  It is not possible to go through every single kind of cheese, so I’ve chosen 4 well known cheeses to introduce.


Mozzarella: When we talk about cheese, Mozzarella must be the first few kinds of cheese that pop up in most people’s head, however, a majority of them might not know how is it looks like.  Mozzarella looks like bean curd, creamy white in color with very soft texture.  Fresh mozzarella sold in grocery stores or supermarkets are usually packed in brine in order to keep its freshness and softness.  Mozzarella is originated from Italy; the most traditional ones are made by milk of water buffalo.  In recent years, an increasing number of cheese manufactures tend to use cow’s milk instead of water buffalo’s, due to the relatively lower supply of the latter one.  Since the texture of Mozzarella is soft as tofu, people seldom grate or cook it, they simply cut into thin slices and serve cold is the most common way of eating it. The after-taste of it is not very strong; therefore, people usually eat it with food of stronger or outstanding taste.  Italian’s well-known appetizer, Caprese Salad, is the combination of mozzarella cheese with tomato slices and balsamic vinegar.

Brie: I bet many people have tried Brie, but they just do not know its name.  Brie is very common for spreading due to its creamy interior.  It is named with its origin, Brie in France. It has a pastel yellow color interior, which is covered by a thin white powdery crust.  Brie is produced from either whole or semi-skimmed milk.  The cheese curd is obtained by adding rennet and the heating of milk.  It is then casted into round cheese molds to be drained and aged for several weeks.  Stronger flavor resulted with longer aging period.  For the convenience of consumers, supermarkets usually cut a mold of Brie into smaller portions, like a piece of pie, and wrap it up air tight to preserve the quality of cheese.  Due to the strong taste and creamy texture, Brie goes very well with food having insipid flavor.  This is why Brie is usually served as cracker spreading in appetizers or snacks in wine tasting.

Parmigiano-Reggiano:  Among all kinds of cheeses, Parmigiano-Reggiano should be most people’s favorite.  Every time I mentioned this name, queries like “I haven’t heard of this name? What’s that?” are raised.  Actually, Parmigiano-Reggiano is the Italian name, it is known as Parmesan in English.  The hard and dry Parmesan cheese curd is obtained by adding in rennet to heated raw cow’s milk, and then being fermented for almost twelve months. Though the fermentation period is long, Parmigiano-Reggiano does not have black or dark blue molds, which brings a “smelly” taste.  On the contrary, the pale yellow cheese brings a very unique, strong after-taste, which lots of people are “in-love” with it.  Parmesan is commonly grated over pasta, risottos.  The creamy sauce of the famous Italian pasta dish, Carbonara, is a mixture of eggs and large amount of Parmigiano-Reggiano.  Furthermore, the hardest part of the cheese crust is sometimes simmered in cream soups to increase the flavor of the dish.

Gruyère:  The same case as Brie, Gruyere is a kind of cheese that is really popular, but its name is not known by a lot of people.  This cheese is originated and named after the town of Gruyère in Switzerland.  The curd is made by adding liquid rennet into raw cow’s milk, then heated by low heat, and poured in molds to be drained and aged from 3 to 10 months.  The appearance of it has nothing special; it is light yellow in color, no molds, and hard in texture.  Since the cheese curb is drained and aged in a large round mold, supermarkets often cut them into size of small blocks in the convenience of the customers.  The taste of Gruyère is sweet with slight taste of saltiness; this distinctive but not overpowering flavor makes this cheese famous for being used in cooking with various foods.  Moreover, though the texture is hard, it is a good melting cheese.  The melted Gruyère is very creamy, which it can be the base sauce for many dishes.  It can be used from appetizer to dessert, for instance, French onion soup, quiches, and also the alluring cheese fondue!

Everyone must have tried cheese; even infants have cheese sticks as snacks.  Though it is such a universal food, not many people know a lot about this delicious food.  By knowing more of it, you will find that every single piece of cheese has its uniqueness that deserves people to appreciate it.